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(p.s.为了阅读此文便利，特意将汉语版陈列如下，同时也让鸭鸭们感受汉语和英语之间的转化过程。)
这两个饼状图显示了能源在澳大利亚家用和温室气体排放的信息。
The
two
pie
charts
illustrate
statistical
information
respectively
regarding
how
energy
is
used
in
an
average
Australian
household
and
the
greenhouse
gas
emissions
that
result
from
these
energy
uses.
我们先来谈谈澳大利亚的能源使用情况。heating占据了整体的能源消耗的最大比例，42%。而the
figure
for
water
heating也占据了一个大的比例，仅比heating低那么一点，30%。相比之下，refrigeration，lighting，cooling只占了比较小的一部分比重，分别占据7%，
4%和只有2%。之后，剩下的15%的能源消耗是用在其他家电上的。
First
let
us
talk
about
the
energy
consumption
of
household
facilities
in
Australia.
Heating
possesses
the
largest
proportion
of
total
energy
usage
in
family
unit,
accounting
for
42%,
followed
by
the
figure
for
water
heating
which
also
occupies
a
large
percentage
with
30%.
In
contrast,
the
data
for
refrigeration，lighting，cooling
are
much
less
significant,
7%,
4%
and
only
2%
respectively.
Finally,
the
remaining
15%
of
the
consumption
is
used
on
other
appliances.
再看看提到的这些家电的温室气体排放情况，与上图存在很大不同。首先，能耗最大的heating在温室气体排放方面略有逊色，以15%的比重排在第三。而最多的温室气体排放来自于water
heating，32%。
相比之下，refrigeration，lighting，cooling的温室气体排放量几乎都是它们的能源使用量的两倍。其他家电所产生的CO2，占据了剩下的28%。
As
for
the
situation
of
greenhouse
gas
emissions
from
the
appliances
mentioned
above,
it
largely
differs
from
the
last
pie.
First,
heating,
which
consumes
the
greatest
amount
of
energy,
shows
a
smaller
share
in
greenhouse
gas
emission,
listed
in
the
third
place
with
a
proportion
of
15%,
while
the
biggest
share
of
emissions
is
from
water
heating
(32%).
By
comparison,
proportions
of
greenhouse
gas
emissions
in
refrigeration,
lighting
and
cooling
almost
double
their
figures
for
energy
use.
CO2
derived
from
other
appliances
consist
of
the
remaining
28%.
根据这两个饼状图，heating是最为环保的家电，而water
heating不仅能耗大，CO2的排放量也相当大。refrigeration和lighting虽然能耗比较小，但是温室气体的排放量也比较大。
Overall,
it
is
noticeable
that
heating
is
the
most
environmentally
friendly
appliance
while
water
hearing
not
only
consumes
more
energy
sources
but
also
give
out
the
most
carbon
dioxide.
Meanwhile,
although
refrigeration
and
lighting
consume
less,
they
emit
more
as
well.
TIPs：文章的语言的多样性取决于主语的多样性和灵活性，该篇所用主语的形式如下：
1.
Heating——题目中所给的名词
2.
the
data
for
refrigeration，lighting，cooling——“数据”作主语
3.
the
remaining
15%——数字作主语
4.
the
biggest
share/proportions
of
greenhouse
gas
emissions——比重词作主语
5.
CO2——题目中greenhouse
gas的同义改写作主语
6.
they——代词作主语
信息之间的链接，请参看文章中的标注
希望此文能让更多鸭鸭们找到雅思小作文的写作思路和写作灵感。
1.Ought you smoke so much？
【解释】在you后面加to，这道题考查的是情态动词Ought to的用法，表示客观上的必须。这句话采用了翻译疑问句，更增强了语气，表示说话者不想让听话者抽那么多的烟。
2.If Fred didn't leave here before five,he mustn't be home yet.
【解释】把mustn't改为couldn't.这道题考查的是虚拟语气，If引导的从句采用了将来时，那么相对应的主句应该用could/would/might/should这四个情态动词中的任何一个+do.
3.I'm doing home.I didn't want to but I must, because my mom asked me not to go out after dark.
【解释】把must改为have to。这句话考查的是情态动词must与have to的区别。must解释成为说话者的主观情感，“自己必须”，出于自愿。而have to表示客观上要求“不得不去做某事”，出于被迫，而非自愿。
4.after I've finished my course,I'll can speak English fluently.
【解释】去掉can。从句用现在时，主句用将来时。will与can不能同时出现。
5.I can be seeing the top of the tower in this bedroom.
【解释】把be seeing改成see。考查的是情态动词can的用法，表示“可以”。
6.He can't be working at this hour!
【解释】hour改为time/moment.情态动词can't be working表示对现在正在进行动作的否定猜测，所以时间必须是此时/此刻。
7.Mary Black ought to not be home by now.
【解释】把not放在to之前，考查的是情态动词ought to的否定形式，应该是ought not to。同时还应注意，这一类由两个词组成的情态动词或者半情态动词的否定形式：have to---haven't to/ don't have to, had better---had better not do, used to---usedn't to/ didn't use to。
这个标题的意思是“现代pwm交流传动的电磁干扰”
具体解释一下，pwm意思是脉宽调制技术，Pulse Width Modulation
主要有spwm和svpwm技术，具体你就自己找书看吧，我就不解释了。
ac就是交流电了，ac drives就是交流传动了，也就是对交流电机的拖动。
emi这个就是电磁干扰的意思，不明白可以看看开关电源方面的书。
那个emissions可以不翻译，就是发射的意思，其实就是和emi合起来用的就是电磁干扰。
下面的我就不翻译了，不过我就在rockwell实验室，呵呵。
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